Saturday, April 26, 2008

My attempt at Fan Fiction. I hope its as much fun to read as it was to write :)

Intro: I am going to attempt to write what I think will happen when Bella transforms into a Vampire based on Stephanie Meyer’s “Twilight” series. Let me know what you think, I have never really tried anything like this before so don’t expect it to be very good. It might be a little hard to follow if you have not read the books, I highly recommend them.

            Bella’s whole body convulsed violently under the excruciating pain she was feeling. Everything burned, and her heart felt like it was dying. It was dying!

“Bella, are you alright! I am so sorry, what have I done, I can try and take it back, let me try and stop it!”

Bella struggled to respond through the pain, “No, its alright…I chose this… to be with you…I love you.” She tried to open her eyes and focus them on his. Her vision was blurry and her eyes were watering. Just then Carlisle entered the room.

“Ok Bella, this will help ease the pain somewhat.” He injected morphine into her and she immediately felt the pain ease enough so she could stop her body from convulsing.

“Edward, tell me a story. Anything to distract me from this.”

“A story, at a time like this?”

“Please” was all she could manage to say.

Edward’s mind reeled as he tried to come up with something that would distract her. He told her the only thing that came to mind.

“There once was a boy, he was very lonely and lost. He believed become a monster, physically as well as mentally. He lived with his adopted family, who helped him stop himself from hurting others. They showed him he could drink the blood of animals to satiate his hunger, and he could live a more normal life. Yet he still felt like his soul was lost. Until one day a beautiful girl came into his life”

“This sounds familiar,” Bella managed to say with a smile that turned into a grimace, “Go on.”

“When he saw her that first day in class, her blood sang for him. She was so beautiful he had to lean back in his seat and do long division in his head to try and stop from jumping on her.  When he got home that night he told Carlisle his adopted father he had to leave, and he tried for a while. He escaped to Alaska for a week with another family with his family’s same beliefs. Yet he could not stay away. He decided that he would try making friends with her, in hopes that it would satiate him enough, and he could go on living his life as normally as possible. When he arrived back at school he saw her walking in the parking lot with headphones on. At that moment a boy’s car began to skid. It was headed straight towards her! All he could think of was not her please not her.  He flew into her and let the car hit his back. It made a huge dent in the car, yet for a moment he thought no one saw, that it had been him and not the other car next to them that had made the dent, but when he looked into her eyes he knew that she had seen. ‘What are you?’ From then on he fell head over heels for her. He found that for some reason she came very close to death on many occasions and he always had to fish her out of dire situations. At one point he left her because he thought it would make her life better, but when he mistakenly thought she was dead, she came to find him and prevent him from ending his own life. He began to understand that she wanted to be with him more than anything in the world, and despite his efforts she would. In the end she decided to give up her life for him”

Bella saw the pain in his eyes at this last comment, she exhaled and said, “I am not giving up my life for you, I am getting a life with you. I love you and want to be with you forever.” Just then the morphine began to kick in more and she fell into unconsciousness.

            The next few days were a blur or pain, confusion, and morphine. Finally after three days her heart stopped. She awoke cold but happy, and unlike what everyone had been telling her she felt no hunger for human blood. Carlisle was surprised, and insisted on doing a full check up, and that’s when they found out. She was pregnant!

            This baffled Carlisle to no end. How could the baby be sharing blood and vampire poison without transforming. It still had a heart beat. Bella honestly did not care. She was blissfully happy.  She could be with Edward all the time, and she never had to sleep again. They were going to be together forever. 


scsorto said...

I definetly enjoyed reading your fan fiction. I've read the TWilight series, so I liked your take on it! If i were to write one, which i won't because i am SO not creative, it would probably be about the Twilight series as well, something to do with Edward's sisters, just because they aren't typically talked about in the novels. Anyways, good job!!

deb said...

Thanks, I am glad there is someone else out there who likes the Twilight series